Drawing Conclusion

When I'm taking notes it doesn't matter if it is print or non print text. I try to stick to the same way of taking notes and asking questions. I focus on finding the headings of the new paragraph so I know when to start a new section of notes. I skim through some of the paragraph, and only take notes on the most important things, everything else is secondary. Know how to take notes in mental notes really helps build your note taking capability. 
The questions I would want to ask the person writing, what made you want to write something about this topic. what where your feelings like while you were writing this passage. or even while giving the interview. 
I would be asking questions to the point to where I was doing the interview myself. This would help get the most information as possible. 

+ drawing c o n c l u s i o n s.

Online social networking is very useful in todays world. It allows people to communicate without having to every need someone. In a way a profile is satiric self-portrait, also the social networking world allows people to P A T H O S. This is the use of emotion in a debate or argument. Using online posts or videos can start up a disagreement and then turn into a debate. Even though its fun to have your own social networking site, you still have to be careful on what you say on it. In a creepy way someone is always watching you on the internet, but posting photos that are wrong and controversial may inform people in the wrong way. If you do it the right way, it can draw more people in and help build your profile. 

So the moral of this blog is to see how certain components of my web page crafts a certain identity. Myself feels like I have a weird sense of humor, I don't really post anything that is to racial or will offend anyone, its more along the lines that I post things that are inside jokes with my friends. I know that my friends will understand but I often wonder on what other people think. If they would understand the jokes that I make, I feel like they would find great humor in it. I feel like people would sound smarter if that used R H E T O R I C A L analysis. This could be knowing what target audience is. What is the purpose of the text. Is the author seem credible or not. What your feelings are on the text. How organized it is, or if the argument seems logical or not. Or when or where the text was written. Those are some important things that I feel like others should take in consideration. I know after reading this chapter I'm going to focus more on this, I don't know maybe some people will take me seriously for once. 


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cant get this image out of my head now. 
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The S E T.

The  S E T.

Using different angles can create a dynamic effect. Sizing up and down images help tell the story better. This draft shows how a story can be told. Not having any text in the draft, lets the mind create their own story.

Rhetorically Speaking

Murder

Showing upon the crime sense. Walking over to the dead body couldn’t help to notice how many times Mark Smith was stabbed. This could determined on how the criminal was feeling towards mark smith as he was stabbing him. First thing I would have looked at would be his cell phone. Seeing whom he was dealing with prior to the stabbing. Could it be related to where his place of work may be? Did Mark did a promotion that someone else should have gotten. As we have looked at the body more, there happened to be bruising on his neck. This means that mark was attacked at the neck before the stabbing. The criminal had to gain control of Mark before he had stabbed him. Knowing how the body had fallen, might also determined where the criminal had ran. After he stabbed him, he would have pushed the body away from himself in order to run away. Going to the stab wones, what kind of knife did the criminal used in order to stab him. If it was a long narrow knife the woon would have closed up and stated internal bleeding.

Mark Smith case, 1021

Seeing the body at first you nothing the bruising on the neck.

Notice the rash that shows up on the arms and neck of the victim.

As we turn the body over, notice the multiple stab wounds in the back.

The criminal seemed to be angry, the stabs weren’t clean. They were rough and wanted Mark Smith to suffer.

There is blactic acid build up in his arms and legs, this is a cause of struggle and he was being stabbed.

Notice on the face, there is bruising. This may be because of being abused as the crime was happening.

The cause of the victim’s death, bleeding out.

How to say goodbye.

Mark was a very hard workingman. He was loved by family, friends. Mark gave off good energy and tried to make everyone’s day better. When I have heard that he had passed, I thought to myself, now how is the world going to change for the good without mark smith. He loved to help others set goals and achieve them. He was a go-getter. He would always push to the point and then when done tried to figure out how to go farther. He never gave up on life, and it is sad to see him go.

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