Thursday, May 2, 2013

Rhetorically Speaking


Murder

Showing upon the crime sense. Walking over to the dead body couldn’t help to notice how many times Mark Smith was stabbed. This could determined on how the criminal was feeling towards mark smith as he was stabbing him. First thing I would have looked at would be his cell phone. Seeing whom he was dealing with prior to the stabbing. Could it be related to where his place of work may be? Did Mark did a promotion that someone else should have gotten. As we have looked at the body more, there happened to be bruising on his neck. This means that mark was attacked at the neck before the stabbing. The criminal had to gain control of Mark before he had stabbed him. Knowing how the body had fallen, might also determined where the criminal had ran. After he stabbed him, he would have pushed the body away from himself in order to run away. Going to the stab wones, what kind of knife did the criminal used in order to stab him. If it was a long narrow knife the woon would have closed up and stated internal bleeding.


Mark Smith case, 1021

Seeing the body at first you nothing the bruising on the neck.

Notice the rash that shows up on the arms and neck of the victim.

As we turn the body over, notice the multiple stab wounds in the back.

The criminal seemed to be angry, the stabs weren’t clean. They were rough and wanted Mark Smith to suffer.

There is blactic acid build up in his arms and legs, this is a cause of struggle and he was being stabbed.

Notice on the face, there is bruising. This may be because of being abused as the crime was happening.

The cause of the victim’s death, bleeding out.




How to say goodbye.

Mark was a very hard workingman. He was loved by family, friends. Mark gave off good energy and tried to make everyone’s day better. When I have heard that he had passed, I thought to myself, now how is the world going to change for the good without mark smith. He loved to help others set goals and achieve them. He was a go-getter. He would always push to the point and then when done tried to figure out how to go farther. He never gave up on life, and it is sad to see him go.


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